Life worth living

I wanted you to know
life is worth much more
but your ridden real low
and my heart is still sore
Why cant you feel more

Funny you are
Though scars
are still hidden
Im just sitten, Writting this story
but dont ignore me
this isn’t even gory
This is love
like two doves
so look above
see whats out their
believe me Its no scare
Cause people really do care

March 1, 2008
Categories: Life, Love, Mayank, Poetry, Writings . Tags: , , , , , , , . Author: Mayank Agarwal

4 Comments

  1. Comment by nectarfizz on March 10, 2008 9:32 am

    I love this one..I can see your imagery.
    “Funny you are
    Though scars
    are still hidden”
    Wow..love these lines best.

  2. Comment by Mayank Agarwal on March 10, 2008 2:37 pm

    Thanks, I am just learning!

  3. Comment by Cendrine Marrouat on March 21, 2008 9:13 am

    Interesting poem. Full of meaning! Keep flowing.

  4. Comment by Mayank Agarwal on April 6, 2008 11:25 am

    Thanks a lot. I’m glad you liked it.

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