Life worth living
Posted by Mayank Agarwal on March 1, 2008
I wanted you to know
life is worth much more
but your ridden real low
and my heart is still sore
Why cant you feel more
life is worth much more
but your ridden real low
and my heart is still sore
Why cant you feel more
Funny you are
Though scars
are still hidden
Im just sitten, Writting this story
but dont ignore me
this isn’t even gory
This is love
like two doves
so look above
see whats out their
believe me Its no scare
Cause people really do care
nectarfizz said
I love this one..I can see your imagery.
“Funny you are
Though scars
are still hidden”
Wow..love these lines best.
Mayank Agarwal said
Thanks, I am just learning!
Cendrine Marrouat said
Interesting poem. Full of meaning! Keep flowing.
Mayank Agarwal said
Thanks a lot. I’m glad you liked it.
nectarfizz said
Miss you fuzzy butt!